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by:
Jo Anne Fontanilla
Every story takes place at same point or points in space and in time. It
is incumbent upon the writer of fiction to "place" his story in space and
time, as early as possible in his narrative, so that you will begin making
the proper associations with the setting. The setting also presents a share
of technical difficulties, but most novelists embrace them gladly. The
novel is a prose form and emphasizes realism: its style ought to be, for
the most part, terse and transparently plain. Whatever poetic impulse the
novelist may have is
likely
to be frustrated: only the setting provides him an outlet for it; for in
his descriptive writing he is allowed to express his feeling for beauty
and create a scene in lavish hues, if he wishes.
The degree of elaboration with which setting is depicted depends upon a
number of considerations, all of which the astute writer keeps in mind.
Perhaps the first consideration is the importance of the setting in relation
to the other essential elements in the story---plot and character. In some
stories--- especially contemporary stories that takes place in surroundings
that are familiar to most readers--- the element of setting can be safely
minimize. The particular setting, moreover, is not indispensable to the
conversation that constitutes the body of the story, although the weather
not only furnishes its title but also points symbolically to the problem
raised by the slightly developed plot.
Another consideration for the conscientious writer is the probable familiarity
of his setting. If the setting is one that is likely to be familiar to
most of his readers, the writer need to depict it in detail; he may assume
that the details he selects will give his readers that pleasure of recognition
that is one of the special values of familiar material. For example, although
millions of Americans have never visited Coney Island, most of them are
so well acquainted with the appearance and nature of the resort that the
writer
using
this setting in a story for an American audience need feel no compulsion
to present this particular setting elaborately.
With a setting that is remote from most readers not only in space but also
in time, a different problem arises. A writer may safely assume that contemporary
London will be much more familiar to most of his readers than Elizabethan
or eighteenth-century London. If his story takes place in either earlier
period, the writer will have to build up his setting out of appropriate
details. Such a treatment involves information concerning the houses, the
costumes, the manners, and the types of work and play characteristic of
the
period.
Since the development of literary realism, readers become increasingly
critical of the accuracy of historic settings, and the contemporary writer
runs the risk of annoying his readers if he indulges in such conspicuous
anachronism as the Elizabethan audience allowed its dramatist when they
used settings remote in time and place. In the use of settings much less
familiar than New York or London---such as ancient Persia or medieval India---the
contemporary writer may content himself with a minimum of specific details---so
long as the details he chooses and emphasizes are appropriate---since every
few of his readers are in a position to challenge the historical accuracy
of such details as he offers.
Finally, the treatment of setting, like the treatment of character, will
depend on the mode in which the writer is working, whether it is classical,
romantic, or realistic. What we have said concerning character in this
connection is equally true of setting. In classical stories---in Samuel
Johnson's Rasselas or Voltaire's Candide, for instance---the setting is
usually sketched in broadly. In romantic stories there is a greater attention
to detail, the writer may fall back on elements in setting that have been
accumulated by generations of romance writers. The Romantic Age brought
in a passionate sense of identification with nature, and the idealization
of it. It is soon reflected in the novel. In realistic stories, the writer
must consider seriously the accuracy and fullness of his details, since
it is one of the tenets of realism that setting should be depicted with
a high degree of circumstantiality. Faithful adherence to this tenet resulted
in the development, in the middle and later nineteenth-century.
The most richly regional story in this collection is Faulkner's "Was,"
and the very detailed presentation of setting, atmosphere, and manners
is justified not only because the place and the time of the story are unfamiliar
even to most American readers, but also because the details are intrinsically
interesting
and amusing.
In contemporary realism, however, the reader is likely to find a rather
less circumstantial treatment of American settings than the realistic fiction
of the nineteenth century. This less particularized treatment is due, on
the one hand, to the writers assumption that readers have now become familiar
with the flora and fauna of regional America and, on the other hand, to
a change in the conception of the technique of effective description.
In the more expansive form of the novel, the writer may feel free to devote
a proportionately greater amount of space to the depiction of setting in
and by itself than the constricted form of the short story will permit.
Most authors' delight in turning out lengthy passages of description, "set
pieces" with lavish strings of adjectives. However, by now that belongs
to a past fashion. Today's readers are impatient and skip solid pages or
even paragraphs that do not advance the story. It is best to insert description
as unobtrusively as possible, an image here, and the next---after dialogue,
or a bit or scatter his pictures of the physical background, just as a
dramatist artfully handles his "exposition."
Percy Lubbock observes that paring a novel bare of most detail is occasionally
good, but not very often. The consensus is that the factual inventory can
be carried too far, is it is by Hugh Walpole and Theodore Dreiser, who
compile altogether too much insignificant data; but that is merely abuse
of a method. Too few externals can also be an error. To most of us, clothes
and houses are telling clues, and the novelist owes it to us to report
how his characters dress, and vividly where and how they live. At the
same
time, he fulfils his role in a larger degree as a social historian. But,
besides this a professor Lathrop suggests, the setting has become ever
more important in contemporary fiction, because we increasingly recognize
a man's background as one of the factors that has shaped him. The active
pressure of environment in forming personality is widely acknowledged now.
"The setting is seen as a 'force'…The plot is often presented not as a
thing in itself, but as something caused and conditional, possible and
characteristic only in its milieu. Hence, the greater demand to have the
setting authentic, realistic. A thin or inadequately studied setting is
not acceptable today."
Ultimately, the kind and amount of background detail one likes in a book
depends on its subject and aim, and no less on the temperament of the author
and each reader.
References:
Reading
Fiction: A Method of Analysis with Selections for Study by Millett, Fred
Benjamin ,Harper; New York 1950
The
Art of Reading the Novel by Freund, Philip, Collier Books; New York 1965 |
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